Loneliness Remains

Consider drums and bass guitar a bonus.
Drums should be 98% close. Bass was added by the 
awesome XerFlik. Thanks a lot.
cheers \m/ sweet leave (sebastian.rauch79@gmx.de)
GUITAR:
-II + melody sometimes 1 octave higher or 
added as harmony?
-III: slower ?
Lead guitar:
I think the lead is fine, too, except this part:
-II + melody:
Maybe there is some kind of octave harmony or the 
melody is simply played an octave higher...
Rhythm guitar:
-reworked verses (bar 12/16 etc.): You were right ! 
Only A1, not A1D3.
-If you got the time you could check the slides in this 
part: -0:44 - II
-and compare them to this part I already reworked with 
correct rhythm but wrong chords: -2:07 - II
-chords at the end of II are insecure, maybe as in 
77/81 or more like 21/25 and 53/57 and 61/65 and 
69/73
DRUMS:
(- 1:25 - I (b) - Tribal)

1. Aaron Aedy (Rhythm Guitar) slides - 失真音效吉他 Distortion Guitar
2. Gregor Mackintosh (Lead Guitar) - 失真音效吉他 Distortion Guitar
3. Stephen Edmondson (Bass Guitar) - 拨片拨电贝司 Electric Bass(pick)
4. Adrian Erlandsson (Drums) - 敲击乐器